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Threepwood's Adventure 4

OK, here it is: My first RB-report. It's far from perfect and I did notice some weaknesses by myself but still feedback on my stile might help me improve. So feel free to ceomment whatever comes to mind.

As far as I remember (I've written it 2 weeks ago as I've nearly no time right now) the rest of my disclaimer can be found in my report wink . Enjoy!

My Report

Be aware that the link on the homepage above leads to a pdf-file of around 2 MB so maybe downloading it would be the better choice. Btw: Thx to Majromax for giving me the idea to write my report with LaTeX smile .


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Nice way to distribute your report.
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Threepwood,

That opening screen is great, although it took me a minute to find the link! Very artistic. You report almost looks like a conference or journal paper. Makes it easy to leave up on my screen at work...

I take it Blue Snake refers to the Nile? I've never heard the reference before. And the rest of your city names were quite interesting as well. Puking Horse? lol

I haven't seen a report with such an early culture bomb yet, so that was an interesting twist that resulted from your Parthenon build. Sure helped you grab a lot of land up North! And then bombing again down south? Wow! And a THIRD time up north? That shot of Houston is great - surrounded by two culture bombs.

Nice work! the Parthenon actually paid off quite well for you, didn't it! Good game. thumbsup
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huh

My reply right above this one is stealth - didn't bump the thread, didn't show on the thread listing. Hmmm.
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Snaproll Wrote:I take it Blue Snake refers to the Nile? I've never heard the reference before. And the rest of your city names were quite interesting as well. Puking Horse? lol

Well, after I decided to use pictures as city names I had to come up with those. Not easy as I've always had problems with finding nice names for stories RPG-characters and so on. So I just looked around on the map to get inspiration. So I normally just took the next ressource and added some adjective wink . So blue snake refers to the river, yes. But that it is even more fitting because of the Nile... well, I haven't noticed it till you mentioned it smile .


Quote:Nice work! the Parthenon actually paid off quite well for you, didn't it!

Yes, that's for sure. Funny thing is, that I was disappointed by every artist showing up as I always wanted another great person so I didn't recognize how much those artists helped me till I reviewed the game by writing the report.


Thx for reading and commenting

Threepwood


EDIT: It wasn't stealth for me, although I've seen something like this yesterday in Sirian's thread. Clicking on the reply-button enables at least the possibility to read the hidden post...
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