[SPOILERS] Team EggHeads: DMOC and TeddyKGB (Now Lurker-Friendly!)

[TeddyKGB]

Draft msg to LP.

Dear Lord Parkin,

How things going for team Orgynized? Pretty well, I suppose.

Since we didn't get reply from you, we are just want to confirm our teams current deals are:
- NAP untill T90.
- OB for the length of our NAP with a no-scouting clause.
- Border agreement: neither of teams will settle more than 5 tiles from their capital into direction of other team.
- EP spending limited by 43EP on each other.

Please correct me if I'm wrong about something.

Right now our scout is close to your NorthWest borders, so we are humbly asking you to let him through.
His goal is to defog northern coast for possible sea trade routes, not to scout your core.
I'm asking you to let him through with following conditions:
- We will follow your instructions how to move our scout inside your culture. As I said, our goal is to defog nothern coast, nothing else.
- We won't share any info our scout could get while inside your culture with any other teams.
- If you like to send a scouting unit through our land to contact India, we will gladly agree with the same conditions in mind.

Scout current location is here:
<... screenshot ...>

We are wellcome more cooperation between our teams.
Exchanging some screenshots could be a next step.

Here is a screenshot of the land between our teams, northern part of it.
<... ss of land above the lakes (forested river) ...>

If you need a screenshot of southern land between our teams, we'll provide.

At some point, we should start negotiate how our borders will look like in that areas.
If you have any proposals now, we could start discuss it.
As we told you, our city#5 goes east direction. Our planned city#6 and probably city#7 will go same direction.
But we both can start dotmap land between our teams right now as well.
We are wellcome fair border agreement and peaceful coexistence between our teams in the future.

If you could share with us some screenshots, it would be great.
Right now we are interested in the land north of your core, for scout moves if you allow us to enter your culture.
Any screenshots you are interested yourself?

Another topic of discussion is establishing fast trade routes with you, but this msg is long enough already.

Kind regards,

DMOC and TeddyKGB of EggHeads.

Any thoughts? Something to add or something to cut?
And please correct my spelling and gramar, my english kinda bad.