Well, IMO Furia's is the pick of the bunch; loved it!
Shekinah is a bit bland, but solid and with some interesting tidbits.
Averax's needs a bit of polishing - his Mum could use fewer clear, bright laughs - but overall a good read.
Shekinah is a bit bland, but solid and with some interesting tidbits.
Averax's needs a bit of polishing - his Mum could use fewer clear, bright laughs - but overall a good read.