Err...yeah I think that's too much. Like, quite a bit too much.
I don't think just spewing random nonsense (even if it is themed well - especially in the tonal way she responds to queries, I can see what you're going for there, and I like it) is what we want from leaders. IMO the "mad" part is more interesting to be as part of a delusion (Keelyn-esque), or with a warped view of the world, than it is to be just random. Look at the picture of Furia, for example:
![[Image: latest?cb=20140512223311]](http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/fallfromheaven/images/d/d9/Furia_the_Mad.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20140512223311)
It's not one of a raving lunatic - there's depth there, with the sorrow and the hallucinations and the hints of self-harm. There's even indications that there are actual demons tormenting her!
I don't know quite how to express it, because I appreciate the direction you've tried to go with her, but I think her point-of-difference, as it were, would be much better served focusing on that sad dignity you can see in her. Being, say, more composed and less zany than Perpentech/Keelyn, but still delusional. Do you get what I mean?
But I really, really do appreciate the work you do for this mod, and I don't want to undermine that. But at the same time, I'd really rather not include that diplo text for Furia - I will if enough people disagree with me, but I'd rather not - because I just dislike the direction it sends her and what it does to her "character".
Sorry
Edit: Oh and I haven't read those stories yet, had a bit of a backlog.
I don't think just spewing random nonsense (even if it is themed well - especially in the tonal way she responds to queries, I can see what you're going for there, and I like it) is what we want from leaders. IMO the "mad" part is more interesting to be as part of a delusion (Keelyn-esque), or with a warped view of the world, than it is to be just random. Look at the picture of Furia, for example:
It's not one of a raving lunatic - there's depth there, with the sorrow and the hallucinations and the hints of self-harm. There's even indications that there are actual demons tormenting her!
I don't know quite how to express it, because I appreciate the direction you've tried to go with her, but I think her point-of-difference, as it were, would be much better served focusing on that sad dignity you can see in her. Being, say, more composed and less zany than Perpentech/Keelyn, but still delusional. Do you get what I mean?
But I really, really do appreciate the work you do for this mod, and I don't want to undermine that. But at the same time, I'd really rather not include that diplo text for Furia - I will if enough people disagree with me, but I'd rather not - because I just dislike the direction it sends her and what it does to her "character".
Sorry
Edit: Oh and I haven't read those stories yet, had a bit of a backlog.
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