(August 25th, 2015, 22:51)Qgqqqqq Wrote: Err...yeah I think that's too much. Like, quite a bit too much.
Absolutely understood; if I didn't suspect/expect that, I wouldn't have hedged about her so much. As I said at the start, I didn't think I could write for her at all - and I only did so because the lines and story I created were just so much fun to write. Sadly, I think you're right that the lines as written belong to someone else. (Someone imaginary who isn't actually in the game.)
I just realized I should probably also post some diplo lines I wrote for Rivanna way back when; they have the potential for a much lesser version of the same problem, as she spends a lot of time talking as if her title of "wraith lord" meant something more than "makes good specter illusions" - which the player knows (in terms of game mechanics at least) is not true. But in case they work in spite of that (or in case they don't so I can think about them more...) ... well, I'll dig them up later this week.
Finally and most importantly: Never feel you need to be sorry just because something I wrote doesn't fit the mod! I write this stuff because I love writing, and sometimes an FfH scene or character looks like fun to me. I'm not nearly as familiar with the game or its universe as some of you guys, and the last thing I want to do is impose something on it that doesn't fit - or worse, as in Furia's case, might make the gameplay more confusing. When I go quiet, it's always for reasons that have nothing to do with the site or anything said here, and in the past, each time you've said something that I wrote doesn't fit, I wound up writing something I liked even more (whether it wound up fitting or not...) - so please don't hesitate or feel embarrassed to tell me so when that's the case.
(The following spoiler contains actual spoilers this time, about the story and the diplo lines above.)