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I think Kalin's idea is good, too.
Another idea, on how to get a functioning diplo with WPC. It is possible to send messages via the APTmod web site, though I haven't tried it out.
It can be found under Usefull > Messages and Usefull > New message. Do you have an account on the web site, Scooter? If nothing else, it will make it easier to view and discuss the messages, without the need of interrupting the way we play the game. And we'll get e-mails with the messages, I hope.
It also assumes they can log into APTmod, but one cannot know before trying.
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Suggested draft to CFC:
Draft to CFC Wrote:Caledorn,
Just checking in with you guys. How's things going for you guys? The Zulu aren't giving you too much trouble are they? A severely belated congratulations on landing the Pyramids by the way. 
Do you guys have an ETA on when you will hook your marble?
Thanks,
scooter - Team RB
That good with you guys?
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Follow-up draft to Apolyton (after they approved our NAP til T150).
Draft to Apolyton Wrote:Great! Glad to hear it. I'm sure it won't end up mattering, but I imagine it would be nice for both of us not to have to closely guard workers from scouting units and that sort of thing.
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scooter - Team RB
Pretty simple, just confirming with them. Let me know if you want me to add anything else to this one, otherwise I'll send pretty soon.
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Perhaps be more explicit that we have a deal with Apolyton. "It would be nice..." makes it sound like we're still discussing it.
If you know what I mean.
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(April 2nd, 2013, 13:03)zakalwe Wrote: Perhaps be more explicit that we have a deal with Apolyton. "It would be nice..." makes it sound like we're still discussing it.
Maybe switch "would" with "will"? Other than that I think they both look good!
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For CFC: I'd shorten this from "Just checking in with you guys. How's things going for you guys?" to "Just checking in, how are things going for you guys?". I would also ask like this: "What is the the ETA for hooking your marble? Our micro people would like to have that info to plan accordingly."
For Apolyton: I would stress (as others suggested) the NAP, something like: "Great! Glad to hear it. For reference, we are now having a NAP until T150. This should include [details]".
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Draft to CFC looks good. Anyway, given that the Spanish has finished 2 colosseums and a library since I last checked, that we have managed to pass them in power, and their cities seems to be on infra builds based on hammer investments, I think chances are good that they're in a sitzkrieg phase right now.
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(April 2nd, 2013, 12:44)scooter Wrote: Suggested draft to CFC:
Draft to CFC Wrote:Caledorn,
Just checking in with you guys. How's things going for you guys? The Zulu aren't giving you too much trouble are they? A severely belated congratulations on landing the Pyramids by the way.
Do you guys have an ETA on when you will hook your marble?
Thanks,
scooter - Team RB
That good with you guys?
I'd rather ask "What's the ETA for when you can get us the marble loan?"
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(April 1st, 2013, 02:02)Nicolae Carpathia Wrote: "douch", freudian slip about their opinions of us  ?
All we need to do is Freudian Slip in "turd sandwich" to show we understand.
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Both drafts sent with a couple of the suggested changes made.
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