quite a bit of stuff to comment on
in somewhat random order,
looking at the background stories i think i forgot to mention a minor tidbit ... recently there have to have been a noticeable event (noticeable in the way that other people might now about it on a decent/good Knowledge local (Sasserine) or Gather infomation checks) in your lives which sets you out as a protential adventurer
THH, you appear to be missing a free district feat, and still lacks random gear. Bonus spells are out of wrack (appearently by the number of bonus spells you have an int of somewhere between 28-35
) ... while it might not actually be a mistake, you have one 0'th level spell to much, and one first level to little on your spells for the day
Lewwyn, sad to say, but after some deliberation i've decided to say no to grabbing Trapfinding as a feat ... mainly because there's already half a dozen of ways to get it, the shining example close to your character idea would be Beguiler ... if you'd still go with Bard i'd like you to tick of the spells you have memorized
Dtay (please edit your player name on the sheet to such for simplicity for me) ... appear to be missing an stance, Artisan's tools need to be clarified as weaponsmithing, winter blanket is probably not going to be needed given the climate youd expect to run around in (hot and humid jungley stuff) ... given that you have paper, no ink(pen)?
Mardoc ... not really anything to mention
in somewhat random order,
looking at the background stories i think i forgot to mention a minor tidbit ... recently there have to have been a noticeable event (noticeable in the way that other people might now about it on a decent/good Knowledge local (Sasserine) or Gather infomation checks) in your lives which sets you out as a protential adventurer
THH, you appear to be missing a free district feat, and still lacks random gear. Bonus spells are out of wrack (appearently by the number of bonus spells you have an int of somewhere between 28-35
) ... while it might not actually be a mistake, you have one 0'th level spell to much, and one first level to little on your spells for the dayLewwyn, sad to say, but after some deliberation i've decided to say no to grabbing Trapfinding as a feat ... mainly because there's already half a dozen of ways to get it, the shining example close to your character idea would be Beguiler ... if you'd still go with Bard i'd like you to tick of the spells you have memorized
Dtay (please edit your player name on the sheet to such for simplicity for me) ... appear to be missing an stance, Artisan's tools need to be clarified as weaponsmithing, winter blanket is probably not going to be needed given the climate youd expect to run around in (hot and humid jungley stuff) ... given that you have paper, no ink(pen)?
Mardoc ... not really anything to mention
