I like the analysis at the start of the game.
With time and practice, you'll be able to do a lot of that in your head. It's certainly a good habit to be in, though!
What was the first build in the capital? I checked the report but I didn't see that. This is usually something that is of great interest, especially in a game like this one. Very strange that you didn't grab a religion with a Spiritual civ. That may have been a mistake, if only because it was pretty easy to get one. Your diplomatic picture is going to end up looking a lot different from mine, I can already see that.
Sad to say, it looks like you were just a little too slow on the early wonders, just missing out on Stonehenge and Oracle. That was a tough break. They fall fast on Monarch... I think you just need more experience to get a sense of what the AI is likely to do on Monarch.
Hey, your Tlatelolco is on the same tile as the barb city of Bantu that I conquered!
Pop-rushing the Great Lighthouse?!
Well I didn't think I'd hear something better than Sirian's whipping of Oxford University, but this may do it. Lot of dead citizens in this game. "Another two food tiles means more popping fun!" Oh I definitely agree!
The city on the southern hill was a good spot. But your third city that you crammed in to the east of the capital was not so great, as you identified yourself. The ICS techniques of Civ3 simply don't provide much benefit in Civ4.
Moving the palace isn't a bad move, but moving it only three tiles away probably didn't provide enough benefit to be worthwhile. Then again, if you got a ton of value from having Bureaucracy in that fishing town, it might have been worthwhile. I don't know, I don't have enough info to say. Whipping the palace though...
Ya know, in Civ3 we had specific rules forbidden players from using workers as bait for the AI. Since workers are more valuable in Civ4, and the AI is not so rabid about chasing them down, we probably don't need a rule for worker decoys in this game. Still, it's probably not something you would see some of our vets doing just out of force of habit! A very clever idea.
Wow, you did a really good job of securing some land in the east vis a vis Saladin. Forget about just surviving, you were kicking some Arab behind!
Tough luck against Mao, it's very hard to fight from a tech hole. Very hard.
Hmm, and Mansa Musa won the space race. Not so surprising, given that he survived in your world. A very different outcome from my game though, where Mao ripped him to shreds! Your analysis was good, in that diplomacy and getting onto the sea earlier seem to have been the things that would have helped you out the most. I think that you have a bright future ahead of you with these games, given the quality of your thinking. Just need some more seasoning and practice. I hope we'll see you back for more games in the future.
And finally - you do realize that your capital didn't have a camp on the deer in that last screenshot, right?