Attached is the final version.
Big thank you to Kurumi for giving me the graphical tool representation.
And also Erwin, those are very salient points and I think I ended up fixing every one of them. I'm not sure what happened with horses, it was something I meant to evenly spread out.
You also helped nudge me to add islands for them to circumnavigate early. I had originally thought to do so, then felt i was taking too much away from Optics, but now I've added them back.
Big thank you to Kurumi for giving me the graphical tool representation.
And also Erwin, those are very salient points and I think I ended up fixing every one of them. I'm not sure what happened with horses, it was something I meant to evenly spread out.
You also helped nudge me to add islands for them to circumnavigate early. I had originally thought to do so, then felt i was taking too much away from Optics, but now I've added them back.
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